tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236889110101753436.post7974676855724276843..comments2013-03-04T18:27:16.709-08:00Comments on Duels and Dice: Interpretation of Historical Swordfighting: Beyond the Practical (Part 1)MWGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12098586171482596337noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236889110101753436.post-36098840837249229512008-02-13T05:51:00.000-08:002008-02-13T05:51:00.000-08:00Well written. Good starting point. My only 'critic...Well written. Good starting point. My only 'criticism' would be the addition of the discussion regarding your persona.<BR/><BR/>Granted, the two are related. But, as an essay (with the multiple parts), that can stand alone and reach a wider audience.<BR/><BR/>I would almost like to see two entries. The first being the essay on the interpretation itself, and then a second being reflective of how that work relates to your persona.<BR/><BR/>Does that make sense?<BR/><BR/>Take it with a grain of salt, this is just one opinion.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07856732021557884810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236889110101753436.post-81199072383147737932008-02-13T04:03:00.000-08:002008-02-13T04:03:00.000-08:00way cool!!!!!! I like this :)Please include pictur...way cool!!!!!! I like this :)<BR/><BR/>Please include pictures, if not in your blog post in any final draft of this essay.<BR/><BR/>I have one or two comment to make, but i want to do so after reading it over a few times.<BR/><BR/>Make sure when its finished you get Ian to post it and Antonio to add it to the East Kingdom Fencing webpage.Larissa Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02387811978642618628noreply@blogger.com